Hook your readers from page one.
Your opening pages matter most. This service gives you a professional critique of your first 25 pages (no more than 6,500 words) to ensure your story starts strong. Perfect for writers preparing to query or self-publish.
Includes:
✔ Margin notes on your first 20 pages
✔ 2-page editorial summary
✔ Notes on character setup and story hook
✔ Recommendations for strengthening your opening
Turnaround: 7–10 days
Your manuscript will never be uploaded to or processed by AI tools. All feedback is crafted by a human expert with decades of writing experience.
Hook your readers from page one.
Your opening pages matter most. This service gives you a professional critique of your first 25 pages (no more than 6,500 words) to ensure your story starts strong. Perfect for writers preparing to query or self-publish.
Includes:
✔ Margin notes on your first 20 pages
✔ 2-page editorial summary
✔ Notes on character setup and story hook
✔ Recommendations for strengthening your opening
Turnaround: 7–10 days
Your manuscript will never be uploaded to or processed by AI tools. All feedback is crafted by a human expert with decades of writing experience.
