Detailed margin notes and structural feedback for your opening chapters.
For writers who want more than an evaluation but aren’t ready for a full edit. I’ll review up to 70 pages (up to 17,500 words) with margin notes and provide a short editorial summary so you can strengthen your opening and set the tone for the rest of your book.
Includes:
✔ Margin notes on up to 70 pages
✔ 2 page editorial summary
✔ Recommendations for pacing, character setup, and story hook
Turnaround: 2–3 weeks
*does not include line editing and proofreading
Your manuscript will never be uploaded to or processed by AI tools. All feedback is crafted by a human expert with decades of writing experience.
Detailed margin notes and structural feedback for your opening chapters.
For writers who want more than an evaluation but aren’t ready for a full edit. I’ll review up to 70 pages (up to 17,500 words) with margin notes and provide a short editorial summary so you can strengthen your opening and set the tone for the rest of your book.
Includes:
✔ Margin notes on up to 70 pages
✔ 2 page editorial summary
✔ Recommendations for pacing, character setup, and story hook
Turnaround: 2–3 weeks
*does not include line editing and proofreading
Your manuscript will never be uploaded to or processed by AI tools. All feedback is crafted by a human expert with decades of writing experience.